--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_DataResponse.tex	2003/06/10 19:29:26	1.1
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_DataResponse.tex	2005/02/22 14:52:56	1.2
@@ -2,14 +2,13 @@
 
 
 \textbf{dataresponse} is an advanced type of response tag that implements
-a simple data storage, and needs an input tag like textline to work
+a simple data storage and needs an input tag-like textline to work
 correctly. Possible attributes are:
 
 \begin{itemize}
-\item \textbf{name}\index{name}: An internal name for the value, it will
+\item \textbf{name}\index{name}: internal name for the value. It will
 have the part id and response id added to it.
-\item \textbf{type}\index{type}: type of data stored in this response field,
-should be one of the types supported by parameter.html 
-\item \textbf{display}\index{display}: a string that will be used to describe
-the field when interfacing with humans
+\item \textbf{type}\index{type}: type of data stored in this response field. It should be one of the types supported by parameter.html 
+\item \textbf{display}\index{display}: string that will be used to describe
+the field when interfacing with humans.
 \end{itemize}