--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_Daxe_Introduction.tex	2024/03/27 16:39:44	1.1
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_Daxe_Introduction.tex	2024/09/18 04:11:17	1.2
@@ -2,10 +2,11 @@
 
 \textbf{Daxe Editor Overview}
 
-The LON-CAPA Daxe editor lets authors edit HTML files and LON-CAPA problem files.  
-It provides a dynamic graphical user interface with a preview, making it easy to see the resulting web page.  
-Daxe understands the LON-CAPA language perfectly, providing a list of elements that can be inserted at the 
-cursor position, and checking the file validity in real-time.
+The LON-CAPA Daxe editor is one of the editors which may be available in your domain for editing HTML files and LON-CAPA problem files.  
+It provides a dynamic graphical user interface with a preview to facilitate viewing of changes to the
+resulting web page.  
+As Daxe understands the LON-CAPA language perfectly, it will provide a list of elements that can be inserted at the  
+cursor position, and can check file validity in real-time.
 
 Daxe is an alternative to the LON-CAPA ``colorful'' editor (which is the current editor by default).  
 Compared to the ``colorful'' editor, Daxe provides a more dynamic interface: elements can be inserted anywhere 
@@ -13,7 +14,7 @@ at any time without the need for saving
 Daxe also provides a preview that is updated whenever the document is saved.
 
 Daxe is not meant to replace the source editor (which is sometimes called ``plain text editor'', 
-or ``XML editor'' even though its syntax is not XML): this text editor can still be useful to fix errors 
+or ``XML editor'': this text editor can still be useful to fix errors 
 in a document syntax, and for authors who prefer to use a simple text editor.  
 Note that when Daxe is used, the resulting document will always have a correct syntax, 
-so it is a better-suited editor for authors who are not used to the syntax.
+so it is a better-suited editor for authors who are not familiar with the syntax.