--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Gnuplot.tex	2013/07/13 21:50:50	1.7
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Gnuplot.tex	2013/08/22 19:42:55	1.8
@@ -1,22 +1,23 @@
 \label{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Gnuplot}
 
 \index{gnuplot}\index{plot}\index{dynamic plot}
-The \textbf{gnuplot} LON-CAPA tag allows an author to design a plot which is created
-when it is viewed.  This is intended for use in homework problems
-where each student needs to see a distinct plot.  It can be used in
-conjunction with a \textbf{script} tag to generate curve data for random plots.
+The \textbf{gnuplot} LON-CAPA tag allows an author to design a plot which will be
+created programatically at the time when it is requested for display by a student. 
+This is intended for use in homework problems where a distinct plot should be 
+rendered for each student.  It can be used in conjunction with a 
+\textbf{script} tag to generate curve data for random plots.
 If you are using
 static data a dynamically generated plot is not appropriate because of
 the overhead associated with generating the plot. In that case, use a
-picture (see \ref{Authoring_Adding_Pictures}).
+picture (see Adding Picture section \ref{Authoring_Adding_Pictures}).
 
 The easiset way to create a template for a gnuplot tag is to use the colorful 
 problem editor, and select \textbf{GnuPlot} from the \textbf{Insert} dropdown menu. 
-Then the boxes may be filled with the assistance of this documentation. By default, only
+Thereafter the boxes may be filled using this documentation to assist you. By default, only
 the parent \textbf{gnuplot} tag and the child \textbf{curve} tag are created by 
-default when the plot is inserted with the colorful editor. Other tags can be 
+when the plot is inserted into a problem using the colorful editor. Other tags can be 
 added to decorate and polish your plot using the \textbf{Insert:} dropdown 
-from the colorful editor.
+provided by the colorful editor.
 
 The following \textbf{gnuplot} parameters may be set:
 
@@ -30,7 +31,7 @@ See the color selection section \ref{Aut
 for help on specifying colors.
 
 \item \texttt{foreground color of image (x000000)} 
-See the color selection  section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Color_Selection}
+See the color selection section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Color_Selection}
 for help on specifying colors.
 
 \item \texttt{height of image (pixels)}
@@ -45,10 +46,10 @@ If the image is transparent the backgrou
 
 \item \texttt{Display grid} ``Yes'' or ``No''.  
 
-\item \texttt{Number of samples for non-data plots}  If a \textbf{function} tag 
-(see section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Curve_Function}) is used to specify the
-\textbf{curve} (see section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Curve}), this indicates the number
-of sample points to use.
+\item \texttt{Number of samples for non-data plots}  If a \textbf{function} tag is used
+(see Plotting Functions section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Curve_Function}) to specify the
+\textbf{curve} (see Specifying Curves to Plot section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Curve}), 
+this indicates the number of sample points to use.
 
 \item \texttt{Draw border around plot} ``Yes'' or ``No''
 
@@ -81,12 +82,12 @@ The parent \texttt{gnuplot} tag allows u
 editor):
 
 \begin{itemize}
-\item \textbf{curve} (see section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Curve})
-\item \textbf{title}, \textbf{xlabel}, and \textbf{ylabel} (see section 
+\item \textbf{curve} (see Specifying Curves to Plot section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Curve})
+\item \textbf{title}, \textbf{xlabel}, and \textbf{ylabel} (see Plot Labels and Key section 
 \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Title_X_Y_Label})
-\item \textbf{key}   (see section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Key})
-\item \textbf{label} (see section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Label})
-\item \textbf{axes}  (see section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Axes})
-\item \textbf{tics}  (see section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Tics})
+\item \textbf{key}   (see Plot Labels and Key section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Key})
+\item \textbf{label} (see Plot Labels and Key section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Label}) 
+\item \textbf{axes}  (see Plot Axes Details section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Axes})
+\item \textbf{tics}  (see Plot Axes Details section \ref{Authoring_Dynamic_Plot_Tics})
 \end{itemize}