--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_ExternalResponse.tex 2003/06/10 19:29:26 1.1
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_ExternalResponse.tex 2005/02/22 14:57:21 1.2
@@ -7,12 +7,12 @@ It expects either a \textbf{textline} or
the tag. Possible attributes are:
\begin{itemize}
-\item \textbf{url}\index{url}: the url to submit the answer form to. Does
+\item \textbf{url}\index{url}: url to submit the answer form to. It does
not need to be a LON-CAPA machine.
-\item \textbf{answer}\index{answer}: a string or scalar variable that can
-encode something that should encode the correct answer. In some cases
+\item \textbf{answer}\index{answer}: string or scalar variable that can
+encode something that should encode the correct answer. In some cases,
this may be nothing.
-\item \textbf{form}\index{form}: a hash variable name that will be submitted
+\item \textbf{form}\index{form}: hash variable name that will be submitted
to the remote site as a HTTP form.
\end{itemize}
The response of the remote server needs to be in XML as follows:
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ inside must be one of the detailed resul
storage documentation. CVS:loncapa/doc/homework/datastorage, look
for \textbf{resource.partid.responseid.awarddetail}.
\item \textbf{message}\index{message}: optional message to have shown to
-the student
+the student.
\end{itemize}
Example: \begin{verbatim}
INCORRECT