--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_ExternalResponse.tex	2003/06/10 19:29:26	1.1
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_ExternalResponse.tex	2005/02/22 14:57:21	1.2
@@ -7,12 +7,12 @@ It expects either a \textbf{textline} or
 the tag. Possible attributes are:
 
 \begin{itemize}
-\item \textbf{url}\index{url}: the url to submit the answer form to. Does
+\item \textbf{url}\index{url}: url to submit the answer form to. It does
 not need to be a LON-CAPA machine.
-\item \textbf{answer}\index{answer}: a string or scalar variable that can
-encode something that should encode the correct answer. In some cases
+\item \textbf{answer}\index{answer}:  string or scalar variable that can
+encode something that should encode the correct answer. In some cases,
 this may be nothing. 
-\item \textbf{form}\index{form}: a hash variable name that will be submitted
+\item \textbf{form}\index{form}: hash variable name that will be submitted
 to the remote site as a HTTP form.
 \end{itemize}
 The response of the remote server needs to be in XML as follows: 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ inside must be one of the detailed resul
 storage documentation. CVS:loncapa/doc/homework/datastorage, look
 for \textbf{resource.partid.responseid.awarddetail}.
 \item \textbf{message}\index{message}: optional message to have shown to
-the student
+the student.
 \end{itemize}
 Example: \begin{verbatim} <loncapagrade>
     <awardetail>INCORRECT</awardetail>