--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_XML_Intro.tex	2003/06/10 19:29:26	1.1
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Authoring_XML_Intro.tex	2005/02/18 20:41:10	1.2
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 \label{Authoring_XML_Intro}
 
 It is assumed that the reader is already familiar with the basic terminology
-of XML. If not, I recommend reading http://www.w3schools.com/xml/xml\_syntax.asp
+of XML. If not, it is recommended that you read http://www.w3schools.com/xml/xml\_syntax.asp
 to acquire a basic understanding of how to read and write XML. 
 
 LON-CAPA uses a very simple subset of XML and there is a lot you do
 \emph{not} need to know, including but not limited to: CDATA, DTDs,
 namespaces, and stylesheets. If you search for XML resources on the
 Internet yourself, you do not need to read about those things to learn
-about how LON-CAPA uses XML for problems.
+how LON-CAPA uses XML for problems.