--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Bugzilla.tex	2004/06/08 21:54:57	1.3
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Bugzilla.tex	2005/03/16 14:41:49	1.4
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 \label{Bugzilla}
 LON-CAPA uses "Bugzilla" (http://www.bugzilla.org/) to report and track bugs 
-and enhancements.  To use Bugzilla, you will need to have an account with 
-Bugzilla. You can create an account at http://bugs.lon-capa.org and then 
+and enhancements.  You will need to have an account to use Bugzilla. You can create an account at http://bugs.lon-capa.org and then 
 select \textbf{Open a New Account}. To report a bug or request an enhancement, do 
 the following:
 
@@ -12,7 +11,7 @@ the following:
 \item Select the product (LON-CAPA) on which to enter a bug.
 \item At the login screen, enter your email address and password.
 \item Click Login.
-\item Select the version of LON-CAPA, the LON-CAPA component the bug is in, the platform your using, and the operating system your using from the pull down menu.
+\item Select the version of LON-CAPA, the LON-CAPA component the bug is in, the platform your using, and the operating system you're using from the drop-down menu.
 \item Enter a summary in the summary text box.
 \item Enter a description in the description text box.
 \item Click Commit.
@@ -24,10 +23,10 @@ development. If you think of an enhancem
 please report it. All reported bugs and enhancement requests posted on Bugzilla
 will be examined by the core LON-CAPA team. Having the request in Bugzilla
 makes it much easier to keep track of bugs and enhancement requests, making it
-less likely such things will get lost or be forgotten as requests not in 
+less likely such things will be lost or forgotten as requests not in 
 Bugzilla frequently are.
 
-Bugzilla also supports conversation about requests, and some workflow and 
+Bugzilla also supports conversation about requests and some workflow and 
 accountability features. You'll be able to see how the developers respond to
 the bug, who is currently responsible for it, and what the developer's intention
 is.