--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Feedback_Content.tex	2006/07/12 17:28:31	1.2
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Feedback_Content.tex	2006/08/07 18:05:54	1.3
@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ The feedback sent with this option is po
 specified in the Course Environment as the person to receive resource
 content questions. If no instructor is defined in the Course Environment,
 this option does not appear in the feedback window. The instructor
-is notified that a question is waiting for her with a little envelope
+is notified that a question is waiting by the appearance of a little envelope
 link near the problem on the Navigation Screen. The instructor can
-also see the message from her Communication Screen. The student's
-version of the problem along with previous submissions is attached
+also see the message from the Communication Screen. The student's
+version of the problem, along with previous submissions, is attached
 to the message. When the instructor replies to the message, the student
-is notified that a reply is waiting for him with the same envelope
+is notified that a reply is waiting by that same envelope
 link next to the problem name on the Navigation Screen.