--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/General_Intro.tex	2002/12/11 19:04:47	1.3
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/General_Intro.tex	2004/11/12 16:31:55	1.4
@@ -1,20 +1,19 @@
 \label{General_Intro}
 \section*{Introduction}
-Help screens like this one will be available a certain points across the system.
-You can recognize them by the blue question mark symbol.
+Help screens like this one will be available at certain points in the system.
+You will recognize them by the blue question mark symbol.
 
 After you log into LON-CAPA, you will see a list of roles which you currently
 have in the system.
 
-You will also see a little window on the site, which is the so-called Remote
-Control.  A good arrangement of the windows will be to have both the 
+You will also see a little window on the site, which is called the Remote
+Control. A good arrangement of the windows will have the 
 Remote Control and the content window available next to each other. To get
-a description of the shorthand buttons on the Remote Control, you can press 
+a description of the shorthand buttons on the Remote Control, you can click 
 the blue \textbf{EXTENDED DISPLAY} button.
 
-On the screen listing your roles, you probably want to select a certain role, 
-for example that of being a student
-in a certain course 
+On the screen listing your roles, you will want to select a certain role. Example: the student role
+in a certain course. 
 (hit the \textbf{Select} button next to the course you want to enter).
 \section*{Navigating a Course}
 You can move forward and backward in the content with the respective buttons