--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Leaving_Feedback.tex	2005/06/19 17:58:59	1.5
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Leaving_Feedback.tex	2006/08/07 18:05:54	1.6
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@ To submit feedback for a specific page,
 
 \begin{enumerate}
 
-\item Open the resource page you want to submit feedback for.
+\item Open the resource page where you want to submit feedback.
 \item Click \textbf{FDBK} on remote control.
 \item At the \textbf{Resource and Feedback Discussion} screen, check at least one of the 
 listed feedback types to direct where your feedback is sent (see \ref{Feedback_Author}, \ref{Feedback_Content}, \ref{Feedback_Policy}, \ref{Feedback_Discussion}, and \ref{Feedback_Discuss_Anon} for further explanation).
-\item Type feedback comment or question in text box.
-\item If applicable, add attachment.
+\item Type your feedback, comment, or question in text box.
+\item If applicable, add an attachment.
 \item Click \textbf{Send}.
 
 \end{enumerate}