--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex	2002/12/11 19:04:47	1.3
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Sequence_Advanced_Editor_Creation.tex	2005/02/15 14:38:30	1.4
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Edit} button to get to the advanced map
 \caption{Initial Map Editor\label{Initial Map Editor FIgure}}
 \end{figure}
 You should see the initial map editor as shown in the ``Initial Map Editor'' figure.
-Note there are two windows: One is the workspace, and one is a secondary
+Note there are two windows: One is the workspace and one is a secondary
 window which will contain information as you add resources.
 
 \begin{enumerate}
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ window which will contain information as
 
 \caption{After clicking \textbf{Start} in the Map Constructor\label{Clicked Start Figure}}
 \end{figure}
-Click the \textbf{Start} box. You'll see what you see in the ``After
+Click the \textbf{Start} box. You'll see what is shown in the ``After
 clicking \textbf{Start} in the Map Constructor'' figure.
-Click \textbf{Link Resource} in the secondary window, then click on the \textbf{Finish}
+Click \textbf{Link Resource} in the secondary window then click on the \textbf{Finish}
 box.%
 \begin{figure}
 \begin{center}\includegraphics[  height=0.25\paperwidth]{mapStraightened}\end{center}
@@ -45,18 +45,18 @@ to end.
 To insert a resource into the flow, click the black line with two arrows,
 seen between the \textbf{Start} and \textbf{Finish} boxes in the
 ``Straightened Map'' figure.
-In the secondary window, you'll see something like the ``Inserting a
+In the secondary window, you will see something like the ``Inserting a
 Resource'' figure.
 Click \textbf{Insert Resource Into Link}. A new resource box will appear
 in the link. Click the resource, which will have the label \textbf{Res}.
-\item Click \textbf{Browse}, and the \textbf{Network Directory Browser} will appear,%
+\item Click \textbf{Browse} and the \textbf{Network Directory Browser} will appear,%
 \begin{figure}
 \begin{center}\includegraphics[  width=0.60\paperwidth]{mapEditorDirectoryBrowser}\end{center}
 
 
 \caption{Network Directory Browser\label{Map Editor Network Directory Browser Figure}}
 \end{figure}
- looking something like the ``Network Directory Browser'' figure.
+ as shown in the ``Network Directory Browser'' figure.
 Press the \textbf{SELECT} button that is next to the resource you want to
 place in the chosen resource box.%
 \begin{figure}
@@ -68,17 +68,17 @@ place in the chosen resource box.%
  Once you've done that, if you look back at the window that popped up when
 you clicked on \textbf{New Resource}, you'll see something like the
 ``Resource Chosen'' figure.
-You can type the \textbf{URL} and \textbf{Title} into the secondary window,
+You can type the \textbf{URL} and \textbf{Title} into the secondary window
 if you prefer, following the format you see when you've successfully browsed
 to a resource. After you click \textbf{Save Changes}, your changes will be
-set, and the icons for the resource will appear in the \textbf{Res} box,
+set and the icons for the resource will appear in the \textbf{Res} box,
 as shown in figure \ref{Map Resource Chosen Figure}. Click \textbf{Save
 Map} in the bar above your map to save the map.
 
 
 Clicking on the left icon for a resource will open a new browser window with
 an informational page about that resource. Clicking on the right icon for
-a resource will open a new browser window taking you to the rendering of
+a resource will open a new browser window and take you to the rendering of
 that resource.
 
 \item Repeat steps two and three for as many resources as you'd like to bind together
@@ -87,9 +87,9 @@ into one page. You can insert the new re
 the map.
 \end{enumerate}
 In addition to manually adding in resources, the Advanced Editor also has
-the ability to import resource in the same way that the Simple Editor can:
+the ability to import resources in the same way that the Simple Editor can:
 From a LON-CAPA network browser window, from a Group Search, or from another
 Map.
 
-The advanced editor has many more capabilities which you can explore.
+The Advanced Editor has many more capabilities which you can explore.