--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Spreadsheet_HowTo_Assessments.tex	2015/12/26 04:35:17	1.4
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/Spreadsheet_HowTo_Assessments.tex	2016/01/03 04:51:10	1.5
@@ -3,29 +3,37 @@
 \textbf{How to deal with multi-part problems}
 
 Often, there are several parts in a specific problem. For example, a
-problem with three parts would have parts 0, 11, 12, and 13. For a
-general spreadsheet, it is not often desirable to sum up all of these
+problem with four parts may have parts 0, 11, 12, and 13. For a
+general spreadsheet, it is often desirable to sum up all of these
 parts, while not knowing how many parts there are as the spreadsheet
 is written.
 
 The spreadsheet has a preprocessor which can expand a symbolic
-expression over all symbolic names that fit. The general syntax is
+expression over all symbolic names that match. The general syntax is
 \index{EXPANDSUM} \texttt{[\&EXPANDSUM(VARNAME;expression)]}. 
 
-For example, for the above assessment with three parts,
+\noindent
+For example, for the above assessment with four parts,\\
 
+\noindent
 \texttt{\&EXPANDSUM(}\texttt{\textbf{PART}}\texttt{;parameter\_}\texttt{\textbf{PART}}\texttt{\_weight{*}stores\_}\texttt{\textbf{PART}}\texttt{\_awarded)}\\
-would become
+
+\noindent
+would become\\
+
+\noindent
 \texttt{parameter\_0\_weight{*}stores\_0\_awarded +}~\\
 \texttt{parameter\_11\_weight{*}stores\_11\_awarded +}~\\
 \texttt{parameter\_12\_weight{*}stores\_12\_awarded +}~\\
 \texttt{parameter\_13\_weight{*}stores\_13\_awarded +}~\\
-where \textbf{bolded text} is used to highlight what the
-\texttt{\&EXPANDSUM} function is doing.
+% bold does not show
+% where \textbf{bolded text} is used to highlight what the \texttt{\&EXPANDSUM} function is doing.
+
 
 \noindent
 \textbf{What `tries' means}
 
-In multi-part questions, the exported value for ``tries''\index{tries} is now 
-the average number of tries to get the parts right. 
-The full data for each part is still stored by the system. 
+In multi-part questions, the exported value for ``tries''\index{tries} is 
+the average number of tries to get the parts correct. 
+The full data for each part is still stored by the system. To assign partial credit based on number of tries, see the example in \textbf{Special Functions} (\ref{Spreadsheet_Functions}).
+