--- doc/build/FC3_install.frag	2004/11/22 21:05:47	1.1
+++ doc/build/FC3_install.frag	2004/12/20 22:23:39	1.2
@@ -19,9 +19,8 @@ http://install.lon-capa.org/</a>.
 Installing Linux is getting easier and easier.  However, it is still a
 non-trivial undertaking and experience with Red Hat Linux will make this 
 process easier.  You will be required to log in to the machine and execute
-some routine Unix commands.  Some familiarity with Linux is assumed.  
-Familiarity with the Apache web server, mod_perl, perl, and MySQL are not 
-required to install and run LON-CAPA.
+some routine Unix commands.Familiarity with the Apache web server, mod_perl, 
+perl, and MySQL are not required to install and run LON-CAPA.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Installation Overview</h2>
@@ -66,7 +65,8 @@ Installing Fedora is quite easy if you'v
 before.  Some documentation is available from 
 <a href="http://fedora.redhat.com/projects/anaconda-installer/">
 http://fedora.redhat.com/projects/anaconda-installer/</a>.
-There are a few sections that require comment.
+Most of the installation screens are self explanatory.  
+There are a few steps that require comment and are dealt with below.
 </p>
 <dl style="list-style:square outside none">
    <dt>Installation Type</dt>
@@ -88,10 +88,11 @@ There are a few sections that require co
    <dt>Firewall Configuration</dt>
    <dd>Select SSH (remote login), HTTP/HTTPS (web server).</dd>
    <dt>SELinux Configuration</dt>
-   <dd>Unless you are familiar with SElinux and writing security policies, for
-       now we suggest you choose an SElinux setting of 'disabled' or 'warn'.
+   <dd>Choose an SElinux setting of 'disabled' or 'warn', unless you are 
+       familiar with SElinux and writing security policies 
+       <b>and want to help us write a security policy for LON-CAPA</b>.
    <dt>Package Group Selection</dt>
-   <dd>Choose 'minimal install' which is on the bottom of the list.</dd>
+   <dd>Choose 'minimal install' which is the last item on the list.</dd>
 </dl>
 <p>
 Finish installing your server, reboot it, and log in as root.
@@ -116,8 +117,7 @@ rpm --import /usr/share/rhn/RPM-GPG-KEY-
 yum update
 </pre>
 <p>
-You will need to reboot your system after yum finishes.  Reboot your system 
-before continuing with the installation.
+Reboot your system before continuing with the installation.
 </p>
 <p>
 Retrieve the FC3_loncapa_yum file from the LON-CAPA install site:
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ for it to function at all.  Below is a l
 To configure and install LON-CAPA, execute the following commands:
 </p>
 <pre>
-cd /root/loncapa-N.N     (N.N should correspond to a version number like '1.2')
+cd /root/loncapa-N.N     (N.N should correspond to a version number like '1.3')
 ./UPDATE
 </pre>
 <p>
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ Point a web browser at your new machine
 coordinator.  Congratulations!
 </p>
 
-<h2>If Things aren't working right</h2>
+<h2>If things aren't working right</h2>
 <p>
 If you've followed the steps above and the server doesn't start or you think 
 there's something wrong, please get in touch with the LON-CAPA developers.