--- doc/build/suse10.2_install.frag	2007/06/01 05:18:47	1.1
+++ doc/build/suse10.2_install.frag	2007/06/04 20:48:19	1.3
@@ -89,13 +89,18 @@ There are a few steps that require comme
        IP address.  When configuring your network card, you should include host name information (e.g., host name = tmp1, domain = lite.msu.edu), as well as name server. Other settings (ip address, gateway, netmask will have been set when you included them in the boot configuration).
    </dd>
    <dt>Registration</dt>
-   <dd>It is recommended that you register your server with Novell, for future updates during the installation process, however it is recommended that you indicate "No" when prompted to "run online update now?" after completing the registration process.</dd>
+   <dd>It is recommended that you register your server with Novell, for future updates during the installation process, and to run the online update.</dd>
    </dt>
 </dl>
+
 <p>
-Finish installing your server, read the "readme", reboot and log in as root.
+After finishing the online update, the system should reboot, and
+proceed to have you create a user account, show you the Release Notes,
+and let you configure any extra hardware, and then finish up the boot
+process. At the prompt login as root.
 </p>
 
+
 <h2>Change software sources for your system</h2>
 <p>If you do not already have a SuSE 10.2 installation source at your location, you may want to consider creating one from the 5 iso files for CDs 1 - 5. Proceed as follows (e.g., for 32 bit):</p>
 <pre>
@@ -225,14 +230,14 @@ perl make_domain_coordinator.pl USERNAME
 <h2>Start/Restart Services</h2>
 <p>
 The LON-CAPA network services take a moment to start.  Most misconfigurations
-will be appearant at this step.
+will be apparent at this step.
 </p>
 <pre>
 /etc/init.d/loncontrol start
 /etc/init.d/apache2 start
 </pre>
 <p>
-If you receive warnings when starting the httpd about missing perl modules,
+If you receive warnings about missing perl modules when starting apache2,
 please make sure you followed the instructions in 
 <b>Installing LON-CAPA Dependencies</b>.  If you still have errors, please
 contact the LON-CAPA support team.
@@ -249,6 +254,6 @@ there's something wrong, please get in t
 You can submit a help request using our web form:<br />
 <a href="http://support.loncapa.org/help/">http://support.loncapa.org/help/</a><br />
 If there were errors in installation of the dependency RPMs or during the
-automatic setup, please send us as much information as possible.
-If some part of this document is unclear please let us know.
+automatic setup, please send us as much information as possible. 
+Please let us know if any parts of this document are unclear.
 </p>